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I rewrote my diary after fixing my grammar mistakes that everyone has pointed out. I also tried to write as big as I can. Is this better? : r/EnglishLearning
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Nick's pre-Paris diary entry in Volume 3. Note the changes of word choice in his feelings for Charlie in the second to last line. <3 : r/HeartstopperAO
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